tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3801593032022113768.post5600835913413733581..comments2023-12-07T03:08:27.219-08:00Comments on Hock G. Tjoa: Hand to Hand Combathock g tjoahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08984611912448001555noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3801593032022113768.post-48082966803665915062012-01-04T12:08:07.608-08:002012-01-04T12:08:07.608-08:00A brief observation, Hock. If you want to inject p...A brief observation, Hock. If you want to inject pace into the narrative, it's best to keep your sentences as short as possible and to cut all description of scenery and setting to the bare minimum. Good luck with this.stuartaken.nethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05695584662320617659noreply@blogger.com